Modeling Parts of the Writing Process Through a Classroom Visit from Student Health Services

Kim Monda
Health and Wellness/Team Work

Purpose Statement

Many students do not make a connection between their emotional and physical health and their performance in school. This activity begins to make this connection, and prepares for a personal visit from someone from the Student Health Services office.

 

Description of Activity

Because English 100 is a writing class, I introduced the concept of student wellness by initiating a group brainstorm activity. I asked students to help generate a list on the board, providing ideas related to student health and wellness. After we had a long list, we broke them into two larger categories: physical and mental (or spiritual) health.
I then asked them to do a freewrite (write continuously) for twelve minutes about areas of stress, or areas to improve, in terms of their physical and/or mental (or spiritual) health.
I collected these one-page writings, and made a list of student concerns, which I passed on to Allyson Zimmerman before she visited the class.
Finally, Allyson visited the class, making a presentation about the Health Services Office, focusing especially on the opportunity to see a personal counselor. She also lead the class in a guided relaxation activity. Since "stress" was an area many students had raised and written about, this technique was especially relevant. (Several students told me they used the technique later on their own to help them overcome anxiety before writing a paper.)
In our follow-up discussion, we talked about how emotional and physical problems can get in the way of performing well in school in general, and of writing well in particular, because it is especially difficult to write if one is distracted by personal problems or issues.

 

Materials Needed

This activity does not require any handouts. As described in number 2 above, you simply lead the students in discussion, and they provide their own paper for their free write. You do need to set up a classroom visit by calling Student Health Services. You may ask for your visit to be as long or short as you like. If you only have five minutes, skip the guided relaxation technique and simply have Allyson (or another representative) talk about the services. It is great for students to be able to connect a face to a service that they still feel a little uncomfortable about.

 

Application

The amount of time you spend preparing students for a classroom visit is up to you. I liked spending about ten to fifteen minutes on the brainstorm, ten to fifteen minutes on the freewrite, and ten to fifteen minutes on our follow-up discussion. Then, Allyson's visit (on another day) took about 30 minutes. Because these activities also modeled elements of the writing process, they reinforced the larger goals of the course. Depending upon your discipline, you may or may not be able to figure out a way to explore the issue of student wellness while reinforcing methods of inquiry or analysis that apply to your class.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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